Bài viết Writing task 2 của học sinh tại Egroup band 5.5-6.0, các bạn có thể tham khảo
Bạn Phạm Ngọc Phương Trinh, học sinh của lớp Speed up 6.0 khai giảng ngày 13/9/2016
Bài viết được band điểm 5.5-6.0. Các bạn có thể tham khảo.
The part-time job affect the student in both negative and positive way. On the hand, many people think that the easiest way to push student out ò studying concentration line in the part time job. It takes students from 4 to 5 hours to work, instead ò spending time to think about lection, their homework was completed perfunctorily or they have to sleep lately to do homework and that is not healthy. Maybe, customers and boss bring pressure to bear upon student beside pressure from academical institution.
On the other hand, some people argue that the most effective scheme to gain valuable experiences during school time is the part-time job. If students focus on learning, they will be lacked of soft skills. They need to communicate with others, except their family, friends. There fore, they experience a lot of cases, which dont't have in educational institution, they know how to handle sitations, this is good for their future.
Conclusion, this topic still in disscussion period and right at moment.